sign language

The films is about a man called Ben who is a "board man", he is doing his last day of work before his promotion

Good things about the film:

•  The film is done in a documentary style which is different and very effective because it seems like its trying to be seriousness which is commercial because no one would really take that job seriously 
• the non-digetic music also add to the light heartedness of the film because it really calming and simple 
• The way he describes all his friends, at the start we think that he has just made up these characters of those people in his head which in the end we see he doesn’t
• The character also loveable because we see how excited he is about the promotion and the what he loves his job, also what he is wearing makes him seem a bit quirky as well
• the is a very good focus pull when he is look at the girl , is very good and a simple technique I could use for my short film
• The end of the is excellent because its not overly dramatic but its still kind of touching to see that people do actually care about him rather than just thinking he is a bit crazy
• its is light hearted and quirky, you would never see anything like this in a normal movie because we would start to get bored but it works as a short film 
• When establishing the scene it is set in and when he is putting up his sign I think really good they way the cut it to the bit of the song, this is good because it allows them to get a lot of shots into the start.
• by doing it in the style of documentary also makes us feel a personal connection to him because its like he is talking to us